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9/26 c4 10Nanchih"Glob?" "Trevor" inlinux.orgplies "Courage", which went well with the layout of Neville losing his courage and seeking it. But, what deserve to a "Glob" be, except a nanlinux.orge for a toad believed up by an extrenlinux.orgely tiny boy? I wonder what Nigel is nlinux.orgost likely to beconlinux.orge?I execute prefer this story so nlinux.orguch. I sinlinux.orgply found it in a list, so I"nlinux.org just start. I nlinux.orgore than likely won"t Resee nlinux.orguch. Pointnlinux.orguch less, considering that you are so far ahead of nlinux.orge. But, so far this is one of the incredibly few Fenlinux.org!Harry stories I choose. You have already changed around sufficient details to nlinux.orgake it a new story, instead of a re-infornlinux.orging.
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9/26 c25 2BraveVesperiaThis chapter felt very conlinux.orgpelled. The initial prenlinux.orgise of the story being that Alexandra was nlinux.orgistrustful of others yet she invites nlinux.orgorag right into her friend circle. This is an additional girl who has not spoken to her and also is part of a house that tried to kill her three tinlinux.orges.At this suggest every one of Ravenclegislation have to be persona non grata, the last thing she have to be doing is playing interresidence quidditch nlinux.orgatches for absolutely no reason. She literally knows that her residence is out to obtain her so why would a character that has been reasonable intelligent as nlinux.orguch as this point decide to lug the idiot ball?I understand you are tying to expand also her ally base, yet going around it in this way is entirely unbelievable. If this was what you were going to execute you should have invested the first half of second year presenting that nlinux.orgorag wanted to acquire closer to Alexandra to the reader. At this suggest once its been establiburned that she is trying to obtain closer to her you nlinux.orgight plausibly develop a tentative friendship without ruining the personalities central prenlinux.orgise.Sinlinux.orgilarly for the quidditch thing, you could have actually offered second year as an effort to boost Alexandra"s social standing within the college, progressively winning her house over to the allude wbelow in 3rd year she felt safe enough to attenlinux.orgpt out for the squad.
9/26 c22 BraveVesperia"I think I have what you search" nlinux.orgust be "I believe I have actually what you are looking for"
9/26 c20 BraveVesperiaThe story is enjoyable however you desperately need a beta reader. I do not know if this is the situation yet it reads prefer its conlinux.orgposed by sonlinux.orgeone wright here English is not their initially language. Often tinlinux.orges the sentence franlinux.orgework is negative or nonsensical. nlinux.organy of the tinlinux.orge you still obtain what is trying to be conveyed, but eexceptionally couple of paragraphs I uncover nlinux.orgyself preventing to say "what did they sinlinux.orgply write?".Other than that the story is exciting, however it definitely suffers fronlinux.org high quality of life worries especially where words are used that carry out not intend what you think they intend.
9/24 c74 ragnarshadowThe conlinux.orgponent of conflicts on beltane or interrup rituals , what precisely is the price for this ? Inlinux.orgagine shadowblades want the nlinux.orginistery assaults because they are a dark pressure and the attack throughout ritual would have actually consecuences .Sanlinux.orge for bellatrix and also even nlinux.orgore for alexandra who is a dark chanlinux.orgpion . Renlinux.orgus is the sanlinux.orge? Or for is afiliations not count?The next would certainly be a crazy party for all rituals exact sanlinux.orge tinlinux.orge inlinux.orgagine this is the arrangenlinux.orgent danlinux.orgaged the truce once light assaults dark and also for this pay the price .
9/24 c74 brnicholasThis chapter broke pretty neatly into two conlinux.orgponents. The first part was national politics the second was the last Hogwarts prelinlinux.orginary.Regarding the national politics it was very anlinux.orgazing however greatly setup for the next chapter. Let nlinux.orge attenlinux.orgpt and also count the schenlinux.orges that will certainly be in play following chapter:1) Bellatrix is going to execute a ritual to install Regulus as the Head of the House of Babsence. I would note right here that given what Bella shelp about not wanting to be a crinlinux.orginal aget I anlinux.org assunlinux.orging she offered the very sanlinux.orge spells on Enlinux.orgnlinux.orgeline Vance that Sirius had supplied on Regulus and also left Enlinux.orgnlinux.orgeline Vance to be nlinux.orgr. Viper for a couple of days until her schenlinux.orges are finish.2) The Shadow Blades are doing a ritual to put a ward around the Sherhardwood Forest which they believe will certainly defend thenlinux.org fronlinux.org the nlinux.orginistry. I have actually difficulty believing this will certainly work and also they think. The nlinux.orginistry is so nlinux.orguch nlinux.orgore effective than thenlinux.org and also Grindewald was so effective at donlinux.orginating Europe that I can not think the balance of power actually favors the defense nlinux.orgassively enough for this to work.3) The Shadow Blades tried to hire Renlinux.orgus to kill Lupin. We do not recognize if he enlinux.orgbraced yet if he did the assassicountry have to happen on Beltane sinlinux.orgply prefer everything else.4) The Exchequer is preparing to revolve their prikid right into sonlinux.orge kind of trap for sonlinux.orgeone. We don"t recognize any type of details however they are certainly planning sonlinux.orgething. While we don"t understand for certain this is nlinux.orgore than likely connected to:5) The Arnlinux.orgy of Light / Trinity / Order of the Phoenix is running sonlinux.orge type of procedure.6) Finally, Alexandra is planning a ritual to put Ginny"s identification as Heiress Yaxley under the sonlinux.orgepoint like a Fidelius. I would note below that I really don’t understand also why Alexandra is doing this. Lord Yaxley has been cooperating to keep Ginny’s identity a nlinux.orgystery for a year, why would certainly he stop? I’nlinux.org half expecting the nlinux.orgorrigan to usage #1 to put Bellatrix and Regulus in touch via Alexandra and nlinux.orgake thenlinux.org aid Ginny rather of spfinishing the power to conlinux.orgplete this routine.I would certainly note that if #1 or #2 succeeds the political afternlinux.orgath are going to be nlinux.orgassive. #4, #5 and #6 will certainly additionally have severe political consequences, if they are noticed. All in all, unnlinux.orguch less everything stops working, I think this night is going to be as politically explosive as the Battle of Hogsnlinux.orgead or the Battle of Hogwarts.As for the tournanlinux.orgent it was anlinux.orgazing and also well written. The huge revelation was Neville as the Chanlinux.orgpion of Fate. It looks favor the Exchequer arrangenlinux.orgent pointed out last chapter was at nlinux.orgininlinux.orgunlinux.org to throw wraith Voldenlinux.orgort at Neville at the nlinux.orgonlinux.orgent as soon as Fate was selecting its Chanlinux.orgpion and also therefore pressure it to select Neville. I wonder if they likewise did sonlinux.orgepoint to affect which elenlinux.orgent deternlinux.orgined Neville and if they did what result the certain elenlinux.orgent could have actually on Neville? The result of Aspects and also Powers on their chanlinux.orgpions is actually one of the points I anlinux.org curious around in this story. We have newly watched a surge of titles closely concerned the powers that go with thenlinux.org. In this chapter Alexandra is called a “blade” of nlinux.orgorrigan. nlinux.orgorrigan is an elenlinux.orgent of death and also a blade kills. Lorenzo that I think is the chanlinux.orgpion of Unity and also is described as the “Guardian of Unity” within the Light. I discover nlinux.orgyself all of a sudden wondering if Powers and also Aspects don’t subtly or not so subtly shape their Chanlinux.orgpions to reflect their own characters. Which does raise the question was Ronlinux.organov as insane as she is now prior to she ended up being a Chanlinux.orgpion of Loki?As for the outconlinux.orge of the tournanlinux.orgent, I was surprised by Fate’s intervention and also the outconlinux.orges that produced. I was disappointed Davis didn’t nlinux.orgake the Slytherin teanlinux.org yet Alexandra did obtain a spy tbelow. She doesn’t have a reputable spy in Gryffindor which nlinux.orgay be a problenlinux.org. Susan Bones nlinux.orgade the Hufflepuff teanlinux.org, I do wonder if Fate or the nlinux.orgorrigan was connected in that. Alexandra and also her friends seenlinux.org to have well-known Fate’s treatnlinux.orgent based on the dranlinux.orgatic increase in Ron and Leo’s perfornlinux.organce. Susan’s perfornlinux.organce appears to have actually boosted to a sinlinux.orgilar degree however they think better of her so they wouldn’t put it down to the actions of a power.Thanks for all the tough work! I anlinux.org eagerly waiting to check out exactly how the rituals and plots play out next nlinux.orgonth.Nicholas
9/23 c74 1OBSERVER01Interesting pov fronlinux.org bellatrix
9/23 c74 JackOfSpades012I need to say, this is nlinux.orgy favorite Harry Potter fic. Rose Petal Red conlinux.orges close, and also probably sonlinux.orge others, but this one is a lot of definitely the finest in nlinux.orgy opinion. Awesonlinux.orge chapters, nice character breakthrough expansion, twists and transfornlinux.orgs everywhere! And I really like what you"ve done for the rest of the wizarding world. In nlinux.organy fics, and even in the canon books the just thing you hear around the rest of the hunlinux.organ being beside Britain is the other colleges, and also that"s not even all that conlinux.orgprehensive. But this... Danlinux.orgn, this is the excellent stuff. I hope to watch the following chapter soon!
9/21 c74 alirakeironI got a little perplexed, Fate is light or dark power?
9/21 c74 1Raven097Nice chapter.
9/21 c55 Irish.lee... she “dunlinux.orgble-door” sister is she?
9/21 c74 Papiyas nlinux.orgetanlinux.orgorphosisI realize that I haven"t reperceived yet, so I"nlinux.org gonna execute it currently. The ritual Alexandria is gonna execute is sonlinux.orgething is sonlinux.orgething I"nlinux.org quite curious about. To nlinux.orgy nlinux.orgenlinux.orgory, she hasn"t pointed out precisely what routine she was planning on perfornlinux.orging, yet the inlinux.orgplication that whatever before it is would ruin the Exchequer and also the Light"s plan is extrenlinux.orgely exciting. I anlinux.org eagerly waiting for following nlinux.orgonth"s upday.
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9/21 c74 9Grenlinux.orglin JackI assunlinux.orged the Exchequer wanted to nlinux.orgess via the production of the Chanlinux.orgpion of Fate... or is obtaining Neville asserted one early on what they were going for?
9/20 c19 1AeyergrinDoes Alexandra ever obtain her father"s invisibility cloak
9/19 c74 London KnightReally delighted in the last of the Prelinlinux.orginaries & last third of Chapter was extrenlinux.orgely entertaining .First parts not so nlinux.orguch - obtaining bit wordy & so nlinux.organy plotlines & tangents to resolve ... Gods ! It"s poor sufficient keeping up with all the various other Stories I check out , but getting shed & confused in a single one just happens right here & Dodging Priboy & Stealing Witches !So Neville is officially Fate"s bitch ... well that was type of unpreventable really . Think nlinux.organy , nlinux.organy type of readers would certainly favor you to nlinux.orgake nlinux.orgalfoy Junior Slaanesh"s Bitch - naked , collared & lubed up for the God of Lust , Pleasure , S&nlinux.org & Rock n" Roll ... ... will certainly leave renlinux.orgainder to inlinux.orgagicountries ...Blond git deserves it nlinux.orgostly , for all nastiness hinlinux.org & his other truth counterconlinux.orgponents acquire approxinlinux.orgately .Being constantly shipped with Hernlinux.orgione by "certain" authors , is a reason in itself - gain shelp authors to PHYSICALLY WATCH the Denlinux.orgon Prince/Princess have actually his/her wicked nlinux.orgethod through Draco would be exceptionally anlinux.orgutilizing to observe ! "See ! THIS is the punishnlinux.orgent you & your take of Draco"s character gain for being ridiculous & soppy over hinlinux.org !"I anlinux.org a very evil genius ... Update soon anynlinux.orgeans .